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Hold your breath
Hold it in
Don't let it out
Keep it within
Don't try to change
You are just fine
You are yourself
Is that not enough?
The dreams you have
The dream of the world
Outside this gate
And without the lock
Why not get out
Why not just run
The sky is clearing
It's long way 'til dark
I know I'm not helping
And it's hard to fight
The tears keep coming
Like days after nights
But all I'm saying
Is "Don't give it up"
The point of living
Is to stay alive.
:iconyukioshiro:
Re-done old poem of mine
Can you see the meaning now? :>
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~BleachedShark Mar 15, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very well written =)
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~YukioShiro Mar 16, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you!
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Mood: Big Grin ~punchkin Aug 21, 2011  Student
I really like it!
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~YukioShiro Aug 22, 2011  Student General Artist
I'm glad you do :D
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~YukioShiro Jan 4, 2011  Student General Artist
I'm not sure if I should change the last part to "Disturb the silence, and they will find out" :o
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It is pretty beautiful :)
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~YukioShiro Jan 4, 2011  Student General Artist
thank you :la:
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